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'Cuz you asked...

So she asked me…
”what are my good points? that makes me a win/win?”
using the same lips that fashioned captivatin' grins…
All appalled, and I stalled saying, "Ummm…girl you don’t know?”
And with a shy turn she asked me “I mean, but what do YOU think though? ”

so I replied, words picked over before saying
“No playin'? You're always displayin' a smile that’ll make a man stay-in
With all intents to lay-in a close proximity to you, before he starts the day-in
All the while prayin' that God-given moments like YOU never may-end,
Trying to take-in every bit of you, and all that you’re made-in.”

and due to instances repeated many times before, she laughed
“c’mon now LiJH…what do you really think?” she asked
So, I stop’d the smooth-speak, and all that appeal
Dropped on her some real talk, and gave her the deal

“Aiight, okay. Some say the cliché, 'people in life are seasonal'
But I’m pleased-to-know that you won’t easily leave-or-go
And I’m eased-to-show you what’s definitely feasible
That as SHE’s-would-go..? you’d TOP the list, easy-though!
See, we-could-go reading-those poetic summaries for those called admirable
But it wouldn’t matter-though, ‘cause them comparing to you is laughable
if stats-were-wrote you’d come out the winner, and that’s palpable
Rick James aura: magical (LOL), but none of it acting-though, ‘cause every bit of you is ACTUAL
and my past'll-show that if madness-shows up in my atlas/globe
you keep me steadfast-and-hold, no guardian angel, you're past-that-role."

she sat there stunned, words lost behind a smile I loved seein'
musing over words, trynna fit herself up in the meanings
I could see she was overwhelmed, brown eyes worked a mist
so I played it Cassanova stye, and put a finger to her lip... (LOL)

"shhhhh! don't say a word. I know you want to freak me like crazy right here and now bu- OWW! Why'd you hit me!?"

"SHUDDUP ELIJAH! It's 'cuz you asked for it!"

K! - "The ladies love meeee, I'm on my COOL J! hahahah!"

Dedicated to my homay Pessie! LOL. I was just playin! sheesh! hahaha

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Permalink Reply by Kea on May 30, 2011 at 10:37am

Hahaha very nice LiJH! :D

Permalink Reply by Tearsz on May 30, 2011 at 11:51am

Shucks dude!!

Awesome read!

Love your flow!!!

Permalink Reply by eiight daez on May 30, 2011 at 5:10pm

Niceee..!

Permalink Reply by Mz. BG on May 30, 2011 at 6:48pm

Lol....sweet!!!! keep spit'n :-)

Permalink Reply by LiJH on May 31, 2011 at 8:39am

DEM - thanks ma! glad you enjoyed it =)

TEARs - LOL. Imma address you as this becuz I know you as this. hahaa. thanks homay!

Ocho - we're gonnna get it onnn soon ;) LOLOLOL. Let them think what they want! hahahaha

Mz BG - thanks mama! Imma be looking out for your stuff too.

Permalink Reply by Hamo Geek Girl on July 13, 2011 at 5:54pm

This one makes me blush. :shy:

Permalink Reply by MsTivz on July 14, 2011 at 7:23am

lmao.. thass how these girls keep fall'n for YOU?.. shame.. lmaoooooooooooooooo.. love the word play g'boi .. still sick wit it'.... i really enjoyed this piece... stay bless'n foo ;0)

Permalink Reply by LiJH on February 21, 2012 at 4:44am

HAHHAHAAAHA oh shuddu[ GrayGurl...u know Im just a shy guy LOL

Permalink Reply by MsTivz on February 21, 2012 at 7:00am

ur far from shy.. more like an aiguy.. lol... but in da' most sincere way possible.. hahahahahaha.. i wuvv you g'boiiiiiiiiiiii.. * akas *

Permalink Reply by Seven Niightz on February 21, 2012 at 9:59am